My first document (email to Milco) was really poor... There was a lot of mistakes, basic words and and many repeated conjunctions like so, because, there is...
By contrast, my last composition there are a lot of prepositions, connectors like although , even though, perhaps,plus... my level has grown up since my beginning , and do the blog helps me to increase more my level,
increasing my vocabulary and decreasing my grammatical, structural or pronunciation errors.
I can see my development clearly, using a lot of my new vocabulary, using the connectors that I said before, the use of adverbs to describe something...
I have evolved a lot in all this aspects
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diumenge, 12 de maig del 2013
My English Competence in 2012
http://fightforwhatiwant.blogspot.com.es/2013/05/lionel-messi-new-facet-of-superstar.html My best composition of 2nd Batxillerat
http://fightforwhatiwant.blogspot.com.es/2013/03/oral-presentation.html This is my best oral presentation of 2nd Batxillerat
http://fightforwhatiwant.blogspot.com.es/2011/11/podcast-match.html My best podcast of 1rst Batxillerat
http://fightforwhatiwant.blogspot.com.es/2011/11/saving-planetwriting.html my best 1rst Batxillerat composition I have chosen these because I think that the four are my best of each year. Firstly, for the 1rst Batxillerat, because both are (i think) my best work: my bests connectors and vocabulary. And the same for the both of 2nd Batxillerat, but increasing the level of my vocabulary, structure and finally the grammatical part.
http://fightforwhatiwant.blogspot.com.es/2013/03/oral-presentation.html This is my best oral presentation of 2nd Batxillerat
http://fightforwhatiwant.blogspot.com.es/2011/11/podcast-match.html My best podcast of 1rst Batxillerat
http://fightforwhatiwant.blogspot.com.es/2011/11/saving-planetwriting.html my best 1rst Batxillerat composition I have chosen these because I think that the four are my best of each year. Firstly, for the 1rst Batxillerat, because both are (i think) my best work: my bests connectors and vocabulary. And the same for the both of 2nd Batxillerat, but increasing the level of my vocabulary, structure and finally the grammatical part.
Steve Aoki in spain
After the tragedy of madrid arena, Steve Aoki has come in Spain again.
Last
thursday 9 of may he arrived in Lleida and he went in a disco there.
Then, saturday 11 of may he went in a Girona's disco called Millennium
from 1am to 2am and then he took a private plane to go to a benidorm
disco the same night. He did the session in benidorm from 5am to 6am.
It
has been a big show everywhere he has gone. He rice the public with
champagne and he throw cakes to some people of the public leaving them
gross.
Any problem has occurred because of the good organisation and precautions.
link: from myself
Vocabulary:
- gross: not clear, dirty
Opinion:
I think that because of the tragedy a lot of precautions has been put
and it's better for the discos and for Spain. It's a pitty that people
need a tragedy to change the things that are wrong or realize that
people's life is in danger. But "it's better later than never"
Madrid Arena
Last November of 2012 a fatal accident in a Halloween party at "Madrid Arena" in Madrid.
The tragedy took place at around 4am: a firecracker or flare went off in the hallway that causes the exaltation of the people. The stampede at Madrid Halloween event leaves three girls dead, two in critical conditions and lots of injured young people after being crushed in a stampede when people were trying to leave the place.
It was the night of 31 a Halloween party was celebrated at ''Madrid Arena'' disco with the big Dj: Steve Aoki. Lots of teenagers had their ticket for the party and went there with their friends.The number of teenagers who were at the party was very high, some of them were under 18, who can't be in, normally. Because of this high number of people and that there was only one exit door opened, a tamponade occurred. As a result, this funny party became a tragedy. The health services arrived late to the site.
As a result of this tragic event, the Spanish authorities have prohibited numerous events that were going to be celebrated for not having the necessary requirements to be able to celebrate it. One example is Chic deluxe, they closed it because it hasn't got the necessary exit doors.
Personal opinion: a big disaster caused by a bad organization...
Link: from myself.
Vocabulary:
tamponade: a lot of people together, blocking the way.
flare: instantaneous flame.
firecracker: little firework
The tragedy took place at around 4am: a firecracker or flare went off in the hallway that causes the exaltation of the people. The stampede at Madrid Halloween event leaves three girls dead, two in critical conditions and lots of injured young people after being crushed in a stampede when people were trying to leave the place.
It was the night of 31 a Halloween party was celebrated at ''Madrid Arena'' disco with the big Dj: Steve Aoki. Lots of teenagers had their ticket for the party and went there with their friends.The number of teenagers who were at the party was very high, some of them were under 18, who can't be in, normally. Because of this high number of people and that there was only one exit door opened, a tamponade occurred. As a result, this funny party became a tragedy. The health services arrived late to the site.
As a result of this tragic event, the Spanish authorities have prohibited numerous events that were going to be celebrated for not having the necessary requirements to be able to celebrate it. One example is Chic deluxe, they closed it because it hasn't got the necessary exit doors.
Personal opinion: a big disaster caused by a bad organization...
Link: from myself.
Vocabulary:
tamponade: a lot of people together, blocking the way.
flare: instantaneous flame.
firecracker: little firework
Steve Aoki
Steven Hiroyuki Aoki is born on 1977 in
Miami. He is an American electro house musician, record
producer and the founder of Dim Mak
Records.
He graduated in Newport Harbor High School in 1995. His father
is Japanese but she grew up with his grandfather, his mother, and
his two older siblings.
Aoki founded his own
label, Dim Mak
Records, in 1996. He started
to be famous in 2006 when he became a board member for MC5 bassist Michael
Davis “Music
Is Revolution Foundation”.
Aoki works with some
popular artists like: Afrojack, Kid Cudi, LMFAO, Lil Jon,… doing some remixes
of their songs.
He has had some
awards like:
Best DJ of the Year - Paper Magazine (2007)
Best DJ of the Year - Paper Magazine (2007)
- Best Set of the Season - Ibiza
Awards (2007)
- Best
Party Rocker DJ - BPM Magazine (2007)
As you can see, the best year for Aoki has been in
2007. Now he is one of the best Dj’s of the world.
Boston
The
bombs that they used in the Boston's attempt, killed 3 persons and
264 were injured, broke out using a toy command (from a car toy).
The
survival suspect said that they read information about how to build a
bomb in an article in the Inspire review "how to build a bomb in the
kitchen of your mother"
The
police affirm that the two brothers, Thamerland and Dzhokhar Tsarnaev,
did an attempt on Boston's marathon with two pressure cookers.
In addition, they needed explosives from fireworks store situated in New Hampshire.
Vocabulary:
- attempt: atentado
- command: mando
- suspect: sospechoso
Opinion:
I think that the article about how to make a bomb in the kitchen of you
mother is not necessary. If TV/magazines don't show these useless
things, this tragedy may not ocurred
Interview
dialogue. interview to Tim Cook.
-Good morning Tim,
-Good morning Albert
-As
you know , this is an interview to know more about your situation and
how are you working on ,probably,on the most important enterprise
actually.
shall we begin sir?
-Okey Albert, I'm ready for you! jajaj
-Firstly, how do you feel actually, in your new or recent job title?
- honestly, very well. It was a pity the loss of Steve, he had everything very well controlled and was the genius of Apple, but I followed him closely and hope to live up.
-I'm sure that you will. My next question is referring to your personal: it is a competent personal?
-It is a very very competent personal. Employees receive a "class" in which is taught to deal with the client, so the answer is that they are very competent.
-And finally Tim, have you got new projects for the following years?
-yes, my team and I have decided to change the iOS system and establish a new aesthetic concept, we also want to introduce new elements besides phones, tablets and computers, how the iWatch, or iGlasses innovative, it will be a revolution.
-Oh, fantastic! so thank you very much Tim, and we hope that all your new toys will be the revolution!
-Your welcome, have a nice day!
-It is a very very competent personal. Employees receive a "class" in which is taught to deal with the client, so the answer is that they are very competent.
-And finally Tim, have you got new projects for the following years?
-yes, my team and I have decided to change the iOS system and establish a new aesthetic concept, we also want to introduce new elements besides phones, tablets and computers, how the iWatch, or iGlasses innovative, it will be a revolution.
-Oh, fantastic! so thank you very much Tim, and we hope that all your new toys will be the revolution!
-Your welcome, have a nice day!
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